As The bell went I saw Mr Marks holding Bands. I was thinking in my head what are we going to do So i went and ask Mr Marks He Said’ you will Find out. So we had to go in to lines to the court we where not allowed to make noises Because classes where working. So there we where at the court we had to stand at the back of the line.
Then Mr Marks told us to pick a partner So i picked sione Mr marks Told us that someone has to be first at running So I said sione will go first at running. So whoever was running first they had to get a band and put it around hips and then you have to put any hand inside the band so you know how it like to run with one arm.
So off sione went it looked like he was on fire when he was running and it look like he was dancing when he was running because he was wiggling around. And his head was moving side wids with his head and then they have to go and tag their partners hand then there partner will run to the end and come back but when sione came and tag my hand i was usain bolt when i was running because Mr Marks told us to run as fast as you could when i was running it felt weird and strange because when i run with no bands around my hand it feels like i am more
7 comments:
Hi Taniela that was cool but it was funny when we ran it look like we had hands but they went all over the place but work keep it up.by Anthony
Hi Taniela,
What a great start off but big sentices.It must of been funny when you were running.Cool work keep it up next time.
Hello Taniela,
I really enjoyed your writing but I think that your sentence are to long.So I think you need to go and make your sentence smaller.So next time I think you need to make them a little bit short but well done keep up the great work.
Bye Mele
Hi taniela
I liked you'r story it was fantastic but maybe try put the fullstops and capital letters. but good job keep it up
Hello Taniela,
I am a EDM310 student at The University of South Alabama. I really enjoyed reading your post. It sounds like you had a great time when doing this activity. It is a lot harder to run with one arm than two, isn't it?
Jamie Ham
Hey Taniela,
Wow Taniela you have a great piece of writing. I really enjoyed reading this post. That sounds hard running with one hand. It sound like you had fun doing this activity. Keep it up Cousin.
From your Cousin Sela
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